Perennially Perturbed

Apr 27, '08 1:06 PM
for everyone

1. Spelling and capitalisation
2. Grammar and punctuation
3. Misued words
4. Redundancy
5. Hedging
6. Lengthy paragraphs
7. Lengthy sentences
8. Passive language
9. Inappropriate tone
10. Poor organisation

But I like 7.... :(

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